Wednesday, July 6, 2011

What do u think of these lyrics?

Im only 16 and im entering a competition to feature on a song with one
of the most famous rappers in the UK, i wrote half of a verse, the
first half is like this...its about pain and struggle. remember im
only 16 what do u think?

Another burdened day, certain hurt and strain
Pain in the my veins circulates like birds of prey
Im tryna learn a way to reverse the urge
To burst my brains like Kurt kobain
Find the perfect place on earth away from the pearly gates
Where the Purple rain sprays on my journal page
And im no longer a turtle in a hurdle race
Concerned by the verbal hate that occurs by day

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